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You Were There - My Silly Poem by ~lampjelly:iconlampjelly:



You are an odd one.
I don’t seem to understand you prettily.
You win against me, you always do,
But why is it that I’m the one who is happy?

I kicked you, but you didn’t kick back,
As I tripped over, you even held me a hand.
I was trying to make you angry, in a way to test you,
But you didn’t, then you raised me up.

You never tolerated me even of the whitest lies,
But you always gave me best advice.
You have always been the smart one, but nevertheless,
You were so open, you were ready to listen.

I once saw you scribbling on the shore,
Words that triggered my memory,
You wrote of what once were our disagreements,
And you stood up, the water washes it away.

Then there was this piece of stone,
As you sculptured with a smile,
Remembering our first days of friendship,
Yes, it was all worthwhile.

Someday,
When my life has passed me by,
I’d lie around as I wonder why,
You were always there for me.
©2008-2009 ~lampjelly
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Author's Comments

This was a poem I made, it was a school assignment anyway, so I think it would be a waste trashing something I have spent whole day doing. I know it's crappy, but, this is all I could think of! ^^;

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:iconlampjelly:
Oh yah, I forgot to add. The last stanza in there was taken from the lyrics in the song "Someday" by Sugar Ray! :3

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"Iba ang INFORMAL GRAMMAR sa MALI!!!" ~ Bob Ong
:iconlampjelly:
I can't make anything with much deeper sense and meaning than this. Sorry. ^^;

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"Iba ang INFORMAL GRAMMAR sa MALI!!!" ~ Bob Ong
:iconleeterry1996:
It's allright, because nobody would have been able to do this good, expect for, perhaps, Shakespeare...
:iconlampjelly:
Wow, thank you! XDD I'm happy you appreciate my work, and of course, my level is so six-feet-under-the-ground compared to Shakespear! XDDDD

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"Iba ang INFORMAL GRAMMAR sa MALI!!!" ~ Bob Ong
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wat a waste... >3>
good thing you posted here XD
nice work :3

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Take a good nap
And eat Healthy food
Your gonna end up died anyways...
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Love is like wind
you can't see it, but you sure can feel it!
:iconlampjelly:
thankx! ;D

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"Iba ang INFORMAL GRAMMAR sa MALI!!!" ~ Bob Ong

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